Been writing alot lately

Ok, I used to write all the time when I was in high school but after I graduated I stopped.  I used to be really good.  I just thought of a poem, which I've never done before.  I'm not much of a poet at all, but I need to put my writings somewhere so that noone will find them here at the house.

When you came back, you said it was meant to be
but i knew everything would still be the same
you told me that you loved me
but what was I to gain?
i took you back
and in such a short time
my world turned black
i was in so much pain
that my life fell apart
now here i am wondering
who will pick up the pieces of my heart?

Yea, I know its horrible but its my best poem.

Toodles!

AmIAYellar on
amiayellar

for it being ur first poem its really good

                                                                    Buh-Byezzz!!

P.S.hope u think of more poemz!!!!!!

William on
william

yo thats prety good for someone whos not a poet,

 

lata William

 

dreamangel on
dreamangel
Thanks guys.  That's really sweet.  I was pretty proud of myself lol.
dreamangel
Female - 25 years old
CANONSBURG, PA
United States
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